Actually, it has questionable merit because you asserted that the headphone jack problem was still an unfixed issue, when in fact the affected units were recalled and repaired months ago. You made a statement that is provably untrue.
The grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors are just more sloppiness.
If you want to be taken seriously as a journalist, stick with the facts. There's plenty of grounds for criticizing Uniden for it's botched handling of the Siren app, Wi-fi, and Analyze. When you put the headphone jack issue into the same category, even though the affected units were recalled and repaired months ago, you cross the line from valid criticism to baseless bashing.