Looks correct.
If you have a multi-meter or a continuity tester, there are a few tests you can run to rule out some common issues:
Disconnect the coax from the radio. Leave it connected at the antenna end, with the antenna installed.
Check for continuity at the radio end of the coax between the center pin and the outer shield. There should not be a connection between these two. If there is, stop and fix. (infinite ohms)
Check for continuity from the outer shield of the coax (at the radio end) to the vehicle chassis. There should be continuity if your antenna mount is correct. If there isn't, you need to fix this. (0Ω or a low number. A bit of resistance is OK)
Check for continuity from the center pin of the coax (at the radio end) to the vehicle chassis. There should not be continuity if everything is correct. If there is, stop and fix. (infinite ohms)
If you get through all that OK, your coax and connectors are probably OK. When doing the tests at the connector ends, try wiggling the coax cable around a bit where it enters the connector. This is often where the issue lies.
Last test for now, and you'll need some help with this:
Check for continuity from the center pin of the coax connector at the radio end to the antenna whip. There should be continuity (0Ω
That should tell us something to help narrow this down. Wish I had a free weekend and we could meet up somewhere in the middle and give this a quick couple of tests. Should be easy to resolve once we get all the information.