RG8 has less loss than RG58. (8db/100feet@850 MHz for RG8, 14db/100feet@850 MHz for RG58. That's not less than twice the loss, it's 4 times the loss.)
Your horizon at 24 feet is about 5.8 miles. In order for you to have a decent shot at a tower 30 miles away, it would have to have a 24 mile horizon - or a height of about 400 feet. Doable, but not that many towers are that high.
As Larry said, DO NOT coil the coax. At 850 MHz, a turn or two is all you need to keep the signal from getting to your scanner. Worst case, stretch it out in one big "U". Best bet, if you're not going to raise the antenna, is to cut the coax to the length you need plus a couple of feet to allow you to move things around.